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Thread: Sunshine Lost pt. 1

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    Jessica and Lindsey grew up in trailers next door to each other their whole lives and were the best of friends. They did everything together: go shopping, eating, and talking about boys. Their families were poor, but their friendship together made their poverty somehow easier.
    Jessica was an 18-year-old stunner. She had olive skin with medium length, brown eyes, and straight brown hair. She was of average height with small but firm b-cup breasts. She had a perky enough attitude to be a cheerleader, but because of her family troubles, she had to spend most of her after school time working. But the good side of that was that she was able to at least buy some nice looking clothes, and keep in the latest fashion. She was well liked in school, mostly because quite frankly, she was a nice girl.
    Probably because they grew up so close to each other, Lindsey was much the same girl as Jessica. Of the only differences between the two was that Lindsey had golden blonde hair and deep blue eyes.
    So far this doesn?t sound like a very special story, but there was an incident that changed their lives forever that I will tell you about.
    It started out as a normal day, with Jessica going over to Lindsey?s family trailer to get her to walk with her to school.
    ?Hold on, I?m coming girl.? Lindsey said as she grabbed a few last things and stuffed them into her bag. She slung her purse around her arm and headed of through the door ready to meet Jessica. She gave her a little kiss on the cheek, and they started off down the driveway off to the school, which was two miles away.
    It was a nice spring day, and both of the girls were wearing sundresses they had just bought from the mall. ?So how was your night?? Lindsey asked as they crossed the street out to the main road. ?Good? Jessica said, ?I spent all night talking to Brian on the phone. I really think he is going to ask me to the spring dance.?
    ?That?s great girlfriend!? as Lindsey spun around through her arms excitedly over her friends shoulder.


    Carl watched the two girls cross the street. He had never seen them before, but he thought they were absolutely gorgeous. Although he would have to wait to see after the crystal-meth just how beautiful they were. He let them walk a little further before he started up the car and followed at a slow pace. He looked over at the tough man sitting beside him and asked what he thought of the two.
    ?Boss is gunna like em two.? the tough man said.
    ?Don?t fuck up this grab you dipshit.? Carl said as his vehicle, a blue 89 cutlass, edged closer to the girls. The tough man was just silent as he stared at the girls and figured the best way to catch them both off guard so he could use the trank gun on both to cause as little commotion as possible. The car was now just 10 feet away from the oblivious girls chatting away. Tough man opened up his door a bit as the ca approached, aimed the trank gun at the side of the blonde?s head, and? phipt? right on target in the center of the neck. He swung fast to the left to catch the stunned, and? phitp? over the right shoulder of the brunette the dart went. ?SHIT!? Carl said as he saw the miss and the brunette take off running leaving her blonde friend mid fall to the ground. The tough man got out of the car and started to chase the brunette not even dropping the gun before starting after her. Carl got out of the car and grabbed the blonde and through her in the back seat without much thought for the tranquilizer dart sticking out of her neck after slamming the door, he ran around to the front door and jumped in and gunned the car, spinning the tires. He swung the car around the next corner almost losing control. He spotted the two running figures and got ahead of them. He stopped the car, opened the door and got out, waiting for the two to come to him. When the brunette was getting in range, he raised his trank gun and unloaded two shots that caught her directly in the stomach and shoulder. She stumbled mid-run, and collapsed to the ground. The tough man caught up, grabbed her by the hair, and dragged her into the car. Carl ran around and got in on the other side and they were off in an instant. ?nice job you stupid fuck? the tough man heard as they started their long journey out to the dessert to meet their emplyer, Dirk.

    Lindsey and Jessica sat in the back unconscious and unaware of the horrible things that were going to happen to them?

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    sorry this is so short, there will be a longer part tommorrow, possibly the finish. any input would be good before then

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    Hmmmm, interesting premise. Could these two perfect friends be forced to somehow fight to the death in the desert? I look forward to seeing where you take this Dirk.


    Cat

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    I agree with Cat... a fight to the death would be awesome! Just because it's how I think, you mentioned Lidsey is just like Jessica except for her hair and eyes and kinda left it at that... well how about if there's 1 other difference, like Lindsey having a set of DD's. *SMILE*

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    Cool Re: Sunshine Lost pt. 1

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    Re: Sunshine Lost pt. 1

    can't wait for the next part. you always have such great and vicious stories.

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